The introduction was kind of short and didn't introduce the topic. For the first couple it was really good until Canada and Antarctica when voice recording got really loud. It went back to normal after those, but got really quiet for the Eiffel Tower. Overall it was really good. I'd give it a 95 out of 100.
Garrett, Digital Story: You did a nice job putting all the images in order and matching images with recordings. Nice job with your transitions, music while credits played. You followed copyright law. You also did a nice job getting this uploaded to YouTube and on to your blog. Recordings: volume erratic, keep volume uniform. Introduction needs work. Content: Your list was supposed to be thoughtful of things you really want to do and/or places you want to go before you die. Morgan Freely – if you are really taken by him you should have shared why. Give more facts about him and pictures that depict his personality and/or profession why do you want to meet him? Become a Mayor of a small town – again why? Love of politics. .. want to make a difference . . .. I’m not convinced this is important to you. The same with riding an elephant – you may want to do this but you didn’t provide any facts such as where you can do this and cost – India . . . Africa? Other topics your research was very good such as scuba diving in Great Barrier Reef, learn how to fly a plane – 17 yrs is correct and you can train at a much younger age – good job, kayaking, Eiffel Tower. 85 B
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ReplyDeleteThe introduction was kind of short and didn't introduce the topic. For the first couple it was really good until Canada and Antarctica when voice recording got really loud. It went back to normal after those, but got really quiet for the Eiffel Tower. Overall it was really good. I'd give it a 95 out of 100.
ReplyDeleteYou did great. Thing you could work on is you tone is quiet. I would give you a 97%
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good projects. I enjoyed the part about of the Eiffel tower.
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Simply in aw Garrett. Truly AMAZING. You really touched my heart with the sword swallowing. Introduction and topics were spot on. Overall.
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Garrett,
ReplyDeleteDigital Story: You did a nice job putting all the images in order and matching images with recordings. Nice job with your transitions, music while credits played. You followed copyright law. You also did a nice job getting this uploaded to YouTube and on to your blog. Recordings: volume erratic, keep volume uniform. Introduction needs work.
Content: Your list was supposed to be thoughtful of things you really want to do and/or places you want to go before you die. Morgan Freely – if you are really taken by him you should have shared why. Give more facts about him and pictures that depict his personality and/or profession why do you want to meet him? Become a Mayor of a small town – again why? Love of politics. .. want to make a difference . . .. I’m not convinced this is important to you. The same with riding an elephant – you may want to do this but you didn’t provide any facts such as where you can do this and cost – India . . . Africa? Other topics your research was very good such as scuba diving in Great Barrier Reef, learn how to fly a plane – 17 yrs is correct and you can train at a much younger age – good job, kayaking, Eiffel Tower.
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